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Tico

*clear* creative writing lives again

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I've written some poetry again and here is the result:

 

 

 

Complain, for it relieves the pain.

Complain, for it makes the problems go away.

Complain, for it makes everything better.

 

Complain, and complain, and complain a thousand times more,

but in the end, all, will stay the same.

 

Blame it on others,

And your pain won't be yours to change.

Blame it on yourself,

And now your pain is theirs to relieve.

Blame it on the world,

And be certain your live won't ever change.

 

Laugh, for it relieves the pain.

Laugh, for it makes the problems go away.

Laugh, for it makes everything better.

 

Keep laughing, and blaming, and complaining,

And be sure to keep crying,

And trick yourself into believing,

that eventually, your problems will go away.

 

Keep doing all those things,

untill one day, you wake up and see,

That tis not the response,

but you, that needs to change,

In order for your life to different be.

 

 

Comments, critique and such are more then welcome.

 

 

 

Cheers

 

 

 

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