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Pools of tranquility

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Below you find a poem I wrote last saturday evening. I wrote it for a girl I think I liked, she hasn't read it yet though and she probably never will, reason: she's getting back together with her ex (they broke up about two weeks ago). Anyway, tell me what you think of the poem.

Cheers

Pools of tranquility

 

 

As I gaze down,

 

Is it perhaps the end that I see?

 

The last part,

 

Of this chapter,

 

The end of which,

 

Is still not written.

 

 

As I gaze down,

 

Is it perhaps light that I see?

 

An escape,

 

From this circle,

 

In which I still,

 

Keep running circles in.

 

 

As I gaze down,

 

Into these pools,

 

These deep blue pools,

 

Of tranquility.

 

I find peace.

 

I find relaxation.

 

 

As I gaze down,

 

Into those two pools,

 

I see something,

 

Something indescribable,

 

Something sensational.

 

 

These two pools,

 

So perfect they are,

 

So serene they are.

 

And where they are,

 

Is the most beautiful place,

 

That I have ever set my eyes on.

 

 

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thats beautiful.

im sorry that she's getting bakk with her ex.

i hope all goes well.

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thats beautiful.

im sorry that she's getting bakk with her ex.

i hope all goes well.

 

Ah well, it wasn't like I was in love with her, more like, sort of likeing her and being interested to get to know her better.

Cheers

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