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Adrillf

Dream Analysis

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So this is my 6th or 7th draft through this story, and I need some new eyes on it before things get too crazy and I start talking to publishing agents and what not, so here you go.

 

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=OGOVSGBN

 

Download the file, read the documents, follow the directions. It's not hard.

 

If you have any questions, feel free to ask.

 

Enjoy. 8-}

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Editing right now. Color coding too.

 

Quick edit:

 

I will rip this to shreds, and I will be brutally honest. Be prepared for that. Editing is something I take seriously. If you don't like my critique, write better. (Goes back to reading David's section)

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No worries at all. To the few people that I gave a hard coppy of this to, I told them to make it bleed with red ink.

 

I understand what editing entails and I know that the best editing involves a TON of corrections.

 

I still wonder how certain books ever got past editing with the way they are written *cough* Twilight*cough*

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Yeah. Plus, this is a monster of a manuscript, when double spaced. I'll try tackling about 5 pages a day, after EDC, ;P

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